Here is the shot before the archway shot, where Chloe is looking up at the arch, and then there is a match on action.
Here is the match on action shot that we need to re-shoot, as the shot was way too fast and didn't look how we wanted it to, as the shot was meant to be as though Chloe was looking up at the arch as she walked, before slowly looking back down.
The next scene that needs to be re shot is when Chloe is sat down with friends in college before the class starts. The only part that needs to be re filmed is when her friends leave, and then there is a shot that awkwardly breaks the fourth wall, which makes the scene look strange.
There are already a few things that we have already re shot. We decided to add some more footage to the burglary flashback scene, as at first, it was simply a scene of POV shots, which was confusing as what was happening, as the audience couldn't see whose point of view it was.
Here is the original POV shot, that we instead used in the first flashback, so that it provides mystery as to who is getting stabbed.
We then added this shot of Amy, who is the character who Chloe thinks died, to convey that she was possibly stabbed by the burglar.
In the next flashback, we added a shot, that wasn't a POV shot, to then finally reveal to the audience that in fact it was Chloe that was stabbed by the burglar.
Finally, we also added a scene where the audience is able to see Chloe stumbling outside and falling into a pool of her own blood. We did this in order to give the film a more sinister feel.
We also need to re-do the second voice over, where Chloe is writing in her diary about what has happened at college, and that she is going to visit Amy's grave. Alongside the voiceover, there is a shot of Chloe writing in the diary, which we need to cut down, as it is too long.









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